1364 errata review #51, 53, 54, 56

From: Shalom Bresticker (Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com)
Date: Sun Jul 28 2002 - 07:32:16 PDT


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 51 open Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com 2001-10-15 12.2 - typos

Synopsis is OK.
Section 12.2, p. 180 of the printed document, p. 193 of the PDF.
Trivial.
Adopt.
The DB entry already contains all discussion on the subject.

Additional comments:

This is another section where formatting got messed up.

Specifically, at bottom of previous page (p. 179), 2nd line of second
paragraph of 12.2,
the apostrophe in "parameter's" did not print.
This probably happened all over the document.

Following that parapraph is a list of 4 items where the format got
messed up.

In the first example on the next page, the comments run off the line and
wrap around to the next line.
That probably happened all over the document as well. It looks like IEEE
either shortened the number of characters on a line,
or used a larger font.

Also, there are a lot of places where spacing around brackets or
parentheses is not consistent, and it looks really ugly.
For example, [ MSB:LSB].

Aarrgghh.

 53 open Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com 2001-10-16
net_lvalue BNF allows {x[i]}

Sections: Syntaxes 9-1, 9-2, 9-3, A.8.1, A.8.5
Difficulty: Proposed solution should be reviewed by ETF.
Recommendation: Adopt.

The following URLs contain the main parts of the correspondence:
http://boydtechinc.com/btf/archive/btf_2000/0990.html
http://boydtechinc.com/btf/archive/btf_2001/1593.html
http://boydtechinc.com/btf/archive/btf_2001/1604.html

 54 open Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com 2001-10-16
5.6.6 Port connections - inaccurate description

Synopsis is OK
Affects Sections 5.6.6, 12.3.9.2, 12.3.8
Hard.
No detailed solution yet proposed.
The DB contains all discussion to date.

 56 open Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com 2001-10-21 typo

Sections 12.3.11, 12.4
New synopsis: Keywords should be bold.
Trivial.
Adopt.

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