[Fwd: fix fixes for etfpassed issues]

From: Shalom Bresticker (Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com)
Date: Wed Mar 12 2003 - 03:07:54 PST

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    There are a few editoral fixes for a few issues still in the etfpassed state.

    - In #149, CHANGE "Shalom:" to "Note:".

    - In #153, Delete the line, "Brad's proposal looks good:" (sorry, Brad...).

    - In #173, the edits are more significant, so just replace the entire thing with
    the following:

    1. Section 1.4: Paragraph beginning "Clause 21":
    The title should end with colon.
    Next sentence should begin on same line.

    2. Section 2.5.1: This piece of the proposal is covered by 116.

    3. Section 3.1: End of paragraph. Change ".." to "." .

    4. Section 7.10.1, last sentence:
    Change "pull 1" to "pull1".
    Change both occurrences of "strong 0" to "strong0"
    Change all three to bold Times,
    as shown at beginning of 7.9.
    (Note - the format of strength indications is
    inconsistent elsewhere as well.)

    5, Section 7.10.2, 1st paragraph, 2nd bullet:
    In "strength1" and "strength0", change
    the "0" and "1" to Times font, not fixed font,
    as in bullets 3 and 4.

    6. Entire document:
    Change all Clause titles to Helvetica 14 point
    including the number.

    Thanks,
    Shalom 

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Shalom Bresticker                           Shalom.Bresticker@motorola.com
Design & Reuse Methodology                             Tel: +972 9 9522268
Motorola Semiconductor Israel, Ltd.                    Fax: +972 9 9522890
POB 2208, Herzlia 46120, ISRAEL                       Cell: +972 50 441478

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